ext_22779 ([identity profile] mistersmearcase.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sabotabby 2010-08-19 12:41 pm (UTC)

Ok the sentence on page 10 is bad but the paragraph about her adorable lack of deformity is laugh-out-loud terrible.

Anyway why is she tacking up a flyer for Promise Keepers? Isn't that pretty much a "no girlz allowed in the klubhouse" deal?

We're supposed to think Molly is a bad girl because of the tattoo, but not too bad, right? Like not so bad she'd question the patriarchy?

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